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Chapter 2 - You know what they do to guys like us in prison?

After three weeks, she was already feeling sorry that she ever came to study in this city, although not at all for having dumped Keith. She actually wondered why she hadn't done it before. Sure, she missed some of the affection and, well, the other stuff, but clearly it had never been worth it. Besides, she had other things on her mind now.

She never called Rineke. She had thought about it. He was handsome. He seemed intelligent. Maybe he liked her. But then she always remembered the kind of company he kept and gave up dreaming. College was as pointless as ever. She didn't even like what she was studying! But her parents had paid for this year, so no point letting it go to waste…

So she attended her classes, kept turning in assignments and day by day tolerated her roommate's habit of leaving her dirty laundry wherever it dropped. She liked her, of course, but they barely saw each other anyway but for breakfast sometimes. Syrup was her name –or at least that's what she said –, and she worked late at night, so by the time she came home to sleep, Ana was already on her way out.

She went to class in the morning and worked in the afternoons, and then walked back home because it was the only time of day she could do it: when the prawns were all back in their homes in District 9. God, how she missed her old prawn-less city.

Not that she couldn't walk on the same street than a prawn, she just didn't want to. It was much better making sure that by that time she was out, all the prawns were definitely gone. There weren't even any cars on that road at that hour, which was also great, since the sidewalks in that neighborhood were so uncared for; not the most desirable area of the city, what with its proximity to a non-human area, but it was cheap. The cheapest she could find, in fact, and that was always a requirement.

She had come to work and study to Joburg for her friends, because they had all come to get a life here. She had come to be near Keith as well. Now she felt like an idiot, a lonely idiot in a big city with nothing to do, surrounded by aliens, of which she was terrified.

"Fuck!"

And atop all that, she almost fell flat on her face when her boots slipped on something.

"What the hell!" she protested angrily and bent over to take a look at the gooey substance under the dim light of the streetlamp.

She was no expert, but anyone could've guessed the nature of that red, sticky fluid: blood.

There was enough blood in the road to paint her entire bedroom, and a trail leading away from it told her the former owner of the blood had probably crept towards that corner of the street there.

She froze.

Whoever or whatever it was, it was still crawling creepily in the direction that her house was. It was a block away, and it was dark, so she couldn't tell if it was a person or an animal. One part of her told her to please stay away and turn around and find a longer way home. Another part thought it was probably her duty to help the poor thing.

And a third part was just curious.

So her cautious part was outmatched and Ana kept walking silently towards the corner, shielding herself with her backpack. She could already hear the harsh breathing of the victim, raspy and wheezy, but didn't stop.

Until she made out the victim's nature.

A prawn was sitting in the middle of the street, complaining and purring, grabbing its leg with its two hands. Apparently it had given up trying to move any further. It was far enough that it hadn't noticed her yet, but close enough for her to distinguish the twitching antennae.

In an almost reflexive reaction , Ana took out her cell phone and looked for the one number she could think of at the moment and, strangely enough, it wasn't MNU's emergency number.

The phone dialed and Ana tip-toed behind a streetlight waiting for an answer.

"Hello?"

"Um, hi, this is Ana, remember? From the other night?" she breathed.

"Hey, what's up!" Rineke sounded pleasantly surprised, though there was quite a bit of noise in the background.

"Yeah, uh… there-is-a-prawn, like, one block away from me…"

Some laughing in the background and then "why?"

"Why? I don't know, do I! I'm asking you! What's a goddamn prawn doing here!"

There was a rumble, then a sound of closing doors and the background noise faded.

"Where are you?" he said later.

"I'm in, uh, Covington Road. I mean, it's not D9 or anything!"

"What's he doing?"

"It's just sitting there, I think it's badly injured… Oh, God, I think he just saw me!"

The prawn had raised its head in alarm.

"Ok, calm down, Ana…"

"Oh, crap, he's looking at me!"

"It's ok, he's probably more scared of you than you of him."

"I doubt that very much" she giggled.

"You say he's injured."

"Yeah."

"Get closer."

"Get closer?"

"Yeah, show yourself to him. Do you remember the sign?"

"Uh, yeah…"

"Well, show him!"

Ana grimaced at the thought, but did as she was told. She stepped out from behind the streetlight and took a dozen hasty steps towards the prawn, who now more than ever seemed determined to get as far away from the human as it physically could, which wasn't saying much, since every time it made an attempt to stand, it fell over with a cry of pain.

"It's squealing" she commented with a bit of disgust.

"What?"

"Squealing! He's squealing, you know, like a pig!"

"That means it hurts a lot. Show him the sign!"

Ana put on her backpack and made the sign the way they had shown her with the help of her other hand. It was harder than it seemed. She tried her best to maintain the pose as she showed it to the prawn. And at that very instant, the prawn froze and looked at her with two big, curious eyes, then raised his own hand to show her three large, pointed fingers.

"I think he just answered."

"Good, that means he knows about the association. Get closer to him, see what's wrong."

Ana hesitated yet again, and Rineke seemed to notice, because he added "it's ok, he knows about us. I promise he's harmless."

Ana, who had watched the news way too many times, hoped with all her might that was true as she stepped even closer to the wounded prawn, who suddenly looked relaxed, like it knew it would all be alright now. They were now a scarce two meters from each other.

"Crap, he's looking at me from head to foot.

"Is he calm?"

"Yeah… looks calm."

"Can you see the damage?"

"Um, I think it's the leg. There's a lot of blood…"

"<Are you from the group? Are you new?>"

Ana stared. The prawn had suddenly spoken. Of course nothing she could understand.

"He's clicking something at me…"

"Pass the phone to him."

There was a moment's confusion in which Ana frowned before exclaiming "WHAT?"

"Put him on the phone, it's ok."

She shook her head in disbelief, but held the phone with the tip of her fingers and stretched out her arm so as not to get a single step closer to the alien, so much so that the prawn had to painfully stretch out himself to be able to reach it. He took the phone, gurgled something out of pain, or annoyance, then held the phone to the side of his spiky, tentacled head and chirped something in its language. Ana thought he kind of sounded like her CD player having a bad time trying to read a scratched disc.

Ana could hear the muffled, distorted voice of Rineke coming from the phone, but all in all she got nothing out of the conversation . Was Rineke speaking prawn as well? At one point the prawn stopped talking and handed her back her phone. She accepted it gladly.

"Look, I can't talk for long, family reunion, you know, so I'll make it short. He's been run over by a car and has missed his bus home. He can't walk. Do you live nearby?"

"Yeah…?" Ana mumbled suspiciously.

"You have to take him to your place."

"You got to be fucking joking!"

"If we don't get him out of the street, he'll be either detained or killed. Maybe both. It'll just be for the night, until the curfew's up.

"But… uh… I… do you even realize what you're asking? These things have-have killed people before" she babbled.

"Ana, I know this guy, he won't give you any trouble, he's very smart."

"You mean monkey smart or police dog smart?" And as he didn't answer –some distant chattering going on in the background- she insisted. "Hello?"

"Look, I can't talk about this here, I'll call back as soon as I can."

"But…"

"Please, Ana" and he hung up, leaving Ana in some weird state of bewilderment. She almost forgot about the prawn that was staring expectantly at her from his kneeling position on the ground.

She quietly and slowly put her phone away with a sigh trying not to stare back.

"Ok, so…" she began. "I'm going to regret this. Get up, come on."

"<Where are we going?>" the prawn clicked incomprehensively.

She tried to ignore it and insisted.

"Come on, get up. Come on" she repeated, making gestures with her arms to make him understand. "Get up and let's go! We walk" she pointed "to my houuuuuse. My house, understand?"

"<Yes, yes, I understand!>"

The prawn didn't take his eyes off her as he planted his hands on the ground to push himself up and his breathing quickened. He slowly and clumsily got to his one good foot and made to stand up straight, but fell over with a squeal of pain.

"Oh, come on…" Ana moaned. "This is going to take forever."

The prawn gave it another try after shooting her an irritated look, but fell on his knees again with a grunt. Then he just sat there, looking determinedly at her like he was waiting for something.

"What?"

The prawn lifted his arm and held it in mid air, waiting for her to take it and help him up. Ana gave a sigh so slow and deep, the prawn took it like she wasn't going to get an inch closer to him, let alone touch him, so he sadly lowered his arm.

Ana hesitated, then gave a jerk in his direction.

"Ok… uh…" she reached for the prawn's arm like what she was about to touch was scalding hot and the prawn responded by happily giving her his arm.

She jumped at the first touch with the prawn's skin. It was hard and tough, but surprisingly smooth and just a bit moist. After a moment's indecision  she helped the prawn up to his feet and tried not to let him topple over. He was breathing harshly now. Without warning he laid his entire right arm on her back and leaned on her shoulder with the left. She almost made them both fall on their noses with her reaction and the prawn gave another little squeal of surprise.

"Sorry! Ok…"

A sudden gush of air hit her left cheek and she gave a start.

Turning her head she saw the alien's throat just inches from her face and noticed the hollow folds on the soft skin open and close with the prawn's every breath. She hadn't had the chance to see it that day with Keith. Now she thought it was interesting, but utterly disturbing. Even in the city night's gloom, there were so many things different, or just plain wrong, about the alien now leaning his entire weight on her shoulders.

"Oh, my God, I'm touching an alien" she thought and almost let out a nervous giggle as they stumbled together towards her house's front door, praying nobody saw them from a window.
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Next Chapter: Chapter 3 – There's a prawn on my couch - Part 1   
 
The door swung open and Ana poked her head inside the dark and listened for signs that there was someone home. The place seemed deserted. It was much too early for Syrup to be home yet.   
"Ok, come on" she helped the prawn pass through the narrow doorway, which still didn't prevent him from hitting his injured leg against the frame.  
 
"Oh, jeez" she said, picking up a panty from the floor. "Sorry for the mess. My roommate's a pi… Wait, what am I saying? You're a prawn!" She threw the panty back on the ground and resumed carrying her guest. &n
Previous Chapter: Chapter 1 - Where is the love?   
 
"Hey, lookit that!"   
Keith signaled towards a dark, shifting figure half concealed behind a container. It was almost nightfall in the city of Johannesburg and the group of hulky friends and their girlfriends was walking down a deserted street from the cinema, celebrating their first week in the city, when the biggest and blondest of them noticed the lonely scavenger amidst the shadows.   
The prawn hadn't noticed them, busy as it was rummaging through the garbage for something to eat, or something to sell. Ana grabbed hold of Keith's humongous quarterback arm begging him


Ana has her first really close encounter. Meet the main prawn character!!! Now complete with illustration!^^

Just some blood in there, which you can't actually see, unless you have an outrageous imagination up to the point where the images become hallucinations. So no mature content, gah!

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Another engaging chapter that keeps up the pace, enough description to flesh the characters but not too much to bog down. I especially appreciate the little details about Ana's dorm life -- too often true! -- and the physical and behavioral descriptions of the poleepkwa. I also enjoyed the phone conversation between Rineke and the poleepkwa.... that Rineke, he's so in control of the situation even through distraction and distance!

I have just one suggestion. The translations for the poleepkwa are a little distracting since we are so solidly inside Ana's point of view at this time in the story, and they don't convey anything that would not easily be conveyed by body language that she could observe. I like seeing the poleepkwa translations in later chapters, especially after the jolting revelation that Kyler understands english. I think that revelation would be even more strongly felt if the reader came to understand it suddenly in the next chapter, just before Ana does. This is not a criticism, though -- only a suggestion.
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TheWelshGamer Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014
if this was ever made into a movie/TV show i could imagine Caity Lotz (the woman who plays Sara Lance in the TV series arrow) Playing Ana's role pretty well, no idea why tho.
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suthnmeh Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Interesting!! Well she kinda has the face. Too bad she looks a bit too old for the part :D
And wouldn't that be sweet, this being made into a movie XD
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TheWelshGamer Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014
ye that would be awesome. but only problem would be copyrights and all that horrible stuff :sigh:. gets in the way of too many great ideas that could of been so cool
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suthnmeh Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Oh well, burocracy... What are you gonna do.
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QueenyProductions Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2011  Student Writer
Ah, an explanation as to why Ana seems to be in a city she cares little for, good. I was beginning to wonder. I really am enjoying this story, the PoHa accociation sounds like something I'd join! - but I hope to God Ana gets over her squeamish behaviour, he's just a prawn (oh, sorry, I mean poleepkwa), hug the damn thing and be happy to be so involved with such an amazing creature!
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suthnmeh Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Yeh... ^^ And if there WERE aliens in Joburg, I was SO there.
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QueenyProductions Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2011  Student Writer
Same here
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placeusernamehere Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011
Yay! More awesomesauce! To the next chapter I go!
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suthnmeh Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Yahoo!!! :la:
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Strange-Pina Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010
I'm gonna bother you again girlyyy

With more of my babbling praise :icondignitylaughplz:

Ana's hesitancy towards the aliens still makes me happy, and where I'm sure some people who read would probably get a bit frustrated and know if they were in her place they'd immediately help the Prawnie xD But her reaction would be way too similar to my own.

Regardless if an alien is familiar with a help association or not I would still be pretty dang nervous about approaching something that could knock me into a wall with a swing of its arm :lmao:

So realistiiiic, it makes me glee. Glee I say

And I have an ungodly love for the name Syrup now. My first image that just tied with the name was maple syrup. But now I'm imaging a sweet cherry syrup, like the ones they use to flavor shaved ice. Yush.

Oh Rineke you handsome family man. Leaving poor Ana with a situation like this. I'd be pissed as hell I'll tell you what :iconhankhillplz:

And once more it just flows so wonderfully all togetherrr.

I'd make this longer but I'm tired and waaay to incoherent to even attempt anything halfway intellectual with my replies xD
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suthnmeh Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Oh YAY!! I love this kind of bothering!

Funnily, though, I haven't been told that about people getting impatient with Ana's hesitant manner XD It appears people are actually pretty amused by it. Wee, you're certainly identified with Ana, teehee!

Realistic is yum!!! And if you really think so then I am officially overjoyed.

Lol I dunno what the heck came over me when I gave Syrup that name XD I have no idea, mwahaha. But I did quite like it, and she's fun to write about.

Yeah, I guess Rineke is a bit distracted. He's so convinced everything is so pretty and wonderful... It's a nice attitude that I wish a lot more people had, though it can be misinterpretted and annoying for some XD But don't worry, Rineke knows what he's doing. I hope...

Ugh, I love text walls like these, especially if they're about poha, duh XDD So thank you, thank you, thank you so muccch!
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Allantsuki Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What? They RAN over him?
Now I'm sad. :(


This was a wonderful reading, your images help visualizing the ambient a lot
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suthnmeh Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Yeh.. But it's a good thing in the end! :la:

Thank you, glad you're enjoying it^^
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Allantsuki Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you're welcome!
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Alwyn-Mallory Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, I think I loved that even more than the illustration for it, and your pics are sooo good! That was just, so...I dunno, words not my thing...but, wonderful!

(....run over by a car, people are so cruel...)
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suthnmeh Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
That's kind of like enough for me to SQUEE with delight :iconiloveyouplz: Thanks so much, you made me hyper, teehee.

Yes, he's not a friggin' raccoon, damnit, and even raccoons don't deserve hit n' run! ... that was unfair to raccons, my appologies. I think I meant even a nazi doesn't deserve it!!! ... Maybe that's too much...
oh my god now i'm being cruel... Somebody stop me before I embarrase myself any further.
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Alwyn-Mallory Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Naw, I know what you mean! ^_^ And I'm happy that the fact that your story makes me happy makes you happy! ;) Hee...
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suthnmeh Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
I can't believe that rambling I did there =__= Forgive me...

Yay, deliciously redundant! :heart:
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FRASSY Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2010
All I can say is that I absolutely loved this! Wonderful writing, everything is so well characterized!
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suthnmeh Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
That's a bit of a relief, because I have difficulties many times with writing stories in english because of my lack of vocabulary. So thanks for that and I hope it's true^^
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FRASSY Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2010
Still it's really good. :nod:
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CommanderEVE Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2009  Student General Artist
Wow, that was amazing. You see, I don't usually read all the way though a fan Fic, allot of fan Fic's I read the first few paragraphs and then I start to think it's boring an no good. But this, I read all the way though, which means that it's very good. I love the descriptive writing, I can imagine everything in my head, and it's like a realistic dream.

You have really thought this though allot, and very in-depth character development, I like that, I cannot stand stories without that, it makes it seem to shallow and boring to read.

Also, the attitude of the Prawn and the Human are very good, I mean allot of people would accidentally make the Prawn seem too Human, and would slightly forget that they are writing the actions of a Prawn, if you know what I mean. But with this wonderful work you have made, I don't see any of that. The characters both have their thick personality and characteristics.

I cannot wait to read the others, and then soon I can finally understand some of the characters you have done in your illustrations of the characters you have drawn.

Well Done! And keep up the good work!
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suthnmeh Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
*gaaaasp* :la: I feel special, teehee!! I felt so toasty reading your comment, it really made my night! Making images pop up in your mind is what I always want to attempt, but me being the writer I really can't know how much I've achieved. It's great when people acknoledge it :dance: *giggles uncontrollably* Sometimes I get comments that really make me feel like writing more even if it's just to please the commenter, and yours is one of those comments.
So I thank thee! Really, you'll be seeing more of them real soon^^
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CommanderEVE Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2009  Student General Artist
That's good. I like making people feel like that, becuase then it makes my day. :D *Hug*

Yes, I thought that, I thought that if I gave you a pleasing commnet then it would imspire you and want you to make more. Becuase your is so good, I thought I would give you some thing which would make you think other.

You are welcome and I look forward to seeing more.

I have to say, you a are one of my favouite friends on the DA. I like you look towards some things. And your always so cheerful. Which is good. :D

Have a good day and good night. :D

Have
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suthnmeh Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
I think I will defenitely go to bed thinking poleepkwa tonight :D Yes, all I need is something to begin the next chapter with. I'll get it eventually. SO MANY THINGS IN MY MIND GAH!

Teehee glad you think so :iconblushingplz: though we practically just met. Pleasure to meet you! Good night! Dream of poleepkwa! I hope I will...
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CommanderEVE Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2009  Student General Artist
XD Good Morning! Geuss what?! I had a dream about Poleepkwa! Dun, dun, dun.... LOL. It was very weird, but i'm goaana tell you anywayz. :P

I had been a Poleepkwa my self, and my brother was still Human, he had to look after me in his house with his child and wife. I had got into a fight with a guy with a baseball Bat and I had gotten all durty and covered in blood. So my brother had to put me in the bath and clean all the crap off me. Dring was the hardest part becuase I kept ripping the Towel as a kept grabbing it out of his hands and having a hissy fit about how the soap was still in the cuts. LOL

Weird eh!? XDDD

You will make a great chapter, I asure you. >:|(£ < A smile that looks like a Prawn. :P

Indeed, it has also been a pleaser to meet you to!
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suthnmeh Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Gaaah there were definitely poleepkwas in my dreams the other night, I just don't remember what was going on, which sucks MAJORLY! You lucky guy...

Pfff oh my god, that dream was pure gold! XDDD *gasp* I think it's even giving me ideas for my next chapter!!! Of course, you might want to use it yourself, so I won't do it until I'm sure you give me permission^^ :la:
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CommanderEVE Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2009  Student General Artist
That dose suck, I have had dreams where I cannot remember. I had another dream about Poleepkwas last night. But I cannot remember it. NOOOO! That sucks!!!

Yes! That's awesome. I love giving people good ideas. And yeas you can use it. :D
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suthnmeh Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Myes :(

Weee then I will!! I think it was the spice that the chapter needed^^ I hope I can have it finished in a day or two :dance:
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MusicAddict23 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2009
I luv the story so far. I had seen the art and loved it, but I only read it now and I'm so glad I did.

I think it's awesome using the Vulcan sign! It made me smile.

I'm definitely looking forward to more!
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suthnmeh Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
And I am so so glad you read it and liked it^^

I have this obsession for imitating the weird, and if I have to make the vulcan sign for making my hand's shadow look like a prawn's, then... XD

Thank you so much!
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MusicAddict23 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009
It totally makes sense. Now I'll think of poleepkwas when I see the Vulcan sign XD
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suthnmeh Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
yay!^^
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topoyiyomayor Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2009
sorry you have copied and pasted the same to different people,I think it was too over stimulated by the story,if I were a "prawn"my antennae would be completely entangled with so many emotions
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suthnmeh Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
haha that's ok :D The story is very pretty
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topoyiyomayor Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2009
I found this story found here.[link] a warning is very strong and sad at the same time,since I read it, I'm shattered.see you soon
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suthnmeh Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Ooooh I've read that one, I almost cried in the first chapter! :crying: I'm still waiting for an update of the new chapter, grrr. Thanks for the link^^
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topoyiyomayor Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2009
Encontre esta historia.[link] Ten cuidado es muy fuerte y tan triste a la vez,desde que la leí estoy hecho pedazos.Hasta pronto
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Sythgara Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
really enjoyed reading that. I wanna see someone being nice to those guys for once though XD as in..nice nice....not forced nice
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suthnmeh Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Yeeeh...^^ I really missed that in the movie. Cuz Wikus is an ass right up to the end of the movie. Well, somehow he made me love him too XD
Thank you so much! More will come!
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topoyiyomayor Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2009
En adelante Trataré de escribir solo en ingles para no molestar a los demás.Hasta pronto y gracias por contestarme.
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suthnmeh Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
No molestas, tranquilo^^ No serías el único que lo hace. Si necesitas decir algo en español, no hay ningún problema *pat pat* Y gracias a tí por los comments!
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topoyiyomayor Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2009
Espero no te resulte tonto.
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suthnmeh Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
el que? :O
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topoyiyomayor Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2009
Este pequeño pensamiento lo comparto con quienes escriben y dibujan estas maravillosas historias.
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suthnmeh Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Eso es muy gentil^^ Muchas gracias, es todo un piropo. Ojalá existieran, verdad?
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topoyiyomayor Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2009
Me gustaria ser un "langostino"para estar contigo,me ases viajar en un mundo de sueños fantásticos con tus dibujos y tus palabras.
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topoyiyomayor Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2009
Nos estas dando unos momentos tan maravillosos con tus historias y con tus dibujos que nos quedamos esperando ansiosamente los siguientes capitulos.Muchas gracias por estos regalos
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topoyiyomayor Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2009
Giving us such a wonderful moments with your stories and your pictures that we were anxiously awaiting the following chapters.Thank you very much for these valuable gifts
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suthnmeh Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you so much for that :hug: That means a lot to me. Don't worry, more will cooome

Pardon me if I only answer in english, it's what almost all my friends here speak^^ Although If you think it necessary I can answer in both..
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